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Elyas
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Wysłany: Wto 08 Sty, 2008   Angielski -> recenzja

Napisze mi ktoś recenzje na do jutra wieczora? btw. nie może być z internetu ściągnięte, bo powiedział profesorek, że słownictwo jest tam inne niż my mamy użyć...

Recenzja musi być z jakiegoś filmu lub książki, co wybierzecie to wasza rola:D(żeby nie było o czymś głupim:D)
 
 
Amadi
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Wysłany: Wto 08 Sty, 2008   

Ta prace napisalem jakies pol roku temu, zeby miec 6 z angielskiego - poprawiana moze i nie przez anglistow, ale przez ludzi majacych stycznosc z jezykiem na codzien i znajacym go bardzo dobrze :ok:

Call of Duty 2

Call of Duty 2 is a first-person shooter video game and sequel to the Call of Duty. It was published in October 2005. Call of Duty 2 takes place during World War II and features three campaigns where the player can be a soldier of the Soviet, British and United States army.
In the first campaign, the player is a soldier on the Russian front, Private Vasili Koslov. The player takes part in a house to house fighting across Stalingrad and Moscow.
In the second campaign, the player pretends to be British soldiers - Sergeant John Davis and tank commander David Welsh. During the advance from El-Alamein to Tunisia, and the fighting at Caen in Normandy, each time the character must take over buildings, towns, and defend against counterattacks.
In the last set of missions, the player starts off by playing a part in D-Day as Corporal Bill Taylor and ends by crossing the Rhine into Germany.
Those three separate campaigns makes one fantastic game, which I’ve passed twelve times already and I’ve spent a lot of time playing multiplayer mode. Authors of this game used few movie’s motives, for example “Saving Private Ryan“. Call of Duty 2 is the best warlike game in the world and also the best game I’ve ever played. The plot is impressive and gripping and the graphic is brilliant. Thanks to this game, I’m now more interested in history.
 
 
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Rekrut
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tak... ale:
Cytat:
Recenzja musi być z jakiegoś filmu lub książki

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fastj
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Zmieni pare zwrotów i wyjdzie na to, że Call of duty to nowy film wojenny, w którym spotykamy się z trzema bohaterami :) nauczyciel zapewne i tak nigdy w swoim zyciu nie słyszał o takiej grze ;]
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Z ogromnym wysiłkiem Don otworzył oczy, aby raz jeszcze popatrzeć na syna.
Ciężki atak serca sprawił, że jego rumiana twarz posiniała. Był konający. Poczuł zapach ogrodu, żółta ściana światła poraziła go w oczy i szepnął:
-Życie jest takie piękne.
 
 
 
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Call of Duty 2

Call of Duty 2 is a new war film and adaptation of video game Call of Duty. It was published in October 2005. The author is Andrzej Wajda. Call of Duty 2 takes place during World War II and features adventure of three company's where the maincharacter can be a soldier of the Soviet and after he went to British and United States army.
In the first army, the main character is a soldier on the Russian front, Private Vasili Koslov (Tom Hanks). Vasili takes part in a house to house fighting across Stalingrad and Moscow. But after Vasili betray his commander and sign on as a British soldiers. He was in there a tank commander (Mel Gibson). During the advance from El-Alamein to Tunisia, and the fighting at Caen in Normandy, each time Vasili must take over important buildings, towns as a strategic points and defend against counterattacks.
In the last Koslov Vasili call up from american army to start off a part in D-Day.
Those three separate chapters makes one fantastic film about about betray, honor and sacrifice for country. Author of this film used few another movies motives, for example "Saving Private Ryan". Call of Duty 2 is the best warlike film in the world and also the best war film I've ever watched. The plot is impressive and gripping. Thanks to this film, I'm now more interested in history especially World War II.


Może być? :D: :D: :P


edit: Pozmieniajcie tylko imona aktorów... :P
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Tu był podpis, ale już go nie ma. :D
 
 
bakus
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Nauczyciele nie są tak tępi, zresztą napewno by coś słyszeli o filmie Call of Duty jeżeli reżyserował go Andrej Wajda :D Jarzyna, ja bym zmienił tego reżysera i wymyślił jakiegoś albo dać kogoś w ogóle nie znanego :D
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syksyk 
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i
Cytat:
It was published in October 2005
zastapic ze bedzie w 2009 r :D
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Amadi
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bakus napisał/a:
Nauczyciele nie są tak tępi,


Wierz mi, sa :)
Wystarczy, ze w zdaniu "Call of Duty 2 is a first-person shooter video game" wyraz "game" zmienisz na "movie" :P
 
 
fastj
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A ile ten twój nauczyciel ma lat??to kobieta czy facet??
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Z ogromnym wysiłkiem Don otworzył oczy, aby raz jeszcze popatrzeć na syna.
Ciężki atak serca sprawił, że jego rumiana twarz posiniała. Był konający. Poczuł zapach ogrodu, żółta ściana światła poraziła go w oczy i szepnął:
-Życie jest takie piękne.
 
 
 
bakus
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Amadi napisał/a:
bakus napisał/a:
Nauczyciele nie są tak tępi,


Wierz mi, sa :)
Wystarczy, ze w zdaniu "Call of Duty 2 is a first-person shooter video game" wyraz "game" zmienisz na "movie" :P

Ta, i wyjdzie z tego cos takiego:
"Call of Duty 2 is a first-person shooter video movie"
Ciekawa kombinacja xD
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Elyas
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Wysłany: Sro 09 Sty, 2008   

on jest anglistą, a jego żona polonistką, więc napewno czytają książki(on czasem czyta angielskie na lekcji jak daje nam jakieś zadanie na lekcji;d albo sprawdzian), a ona jest polonistką więc ogląda i czyta;p powiedziałem, że musi być z filmu albo książki, ale nie zmyślonej:)

thx za robótkę, ale nie przeczytaliście ze "zrozumieniem";P
 
 
helmut 
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nie wiem w czym problem. wbuduj pare bledow, gramatyke omin, slowa poprzewracaj. . . nikt sie nie polapie :D

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Harry Potter is the hero of series of books by Joanne K. Rowling. They play in a world of witches and wizards.

Harry Potter and Goblet of Fire is the fourth book in the Harry Potter series. With 636 pages (hardback British edition) it is very large for a children's book. The book attracted a lot of attention because J.K. Rowling warned that one of the characters would die.

The 14 years old Harry spends the end of the summer with the Weasley's and Hermione Granger in the Borrow. They're in attention of the Quidditch World Cup. During the meeting Death Eaters attack Muggles (non magical persons). But they flee when the Dark Mark, Voldemord's sign appears at the sky. The sign was made by Winky using Harry's stolen wand. Winky is a house elf serving Barty Crouch, a official at the Ministry of Magic.

At the start of the new year are surprises for the students in Hogwarts. The new Defence Against the Dark Arts teacher is the Auror (wizard trained to fight the Dark Arts) Alastor „Mad-Eye“ Moody.

Beside this there will be no Quidditch matches between Gryffindor, Ravenclaw, Hufflepuff and Slytherin because the Triwizard Tournament is held in Hogwarts. It is a centuries-old inter school competition between Hogwarts, Beauxbaton and Durmstrang. The prize is 1000 galleons. Students have to enter by putting their names into a legendary goblet – the Goblet of Fire. Dumbledore draws an age line around the Goblet, so no pupil under the age of 17 may enter the competition. The Goblet shoot out one champion from each of the 3 schools. He selects Cedric Diggory, Fleur Delacour and Viktor Krum. Mysteriously the Goblet also choose Harry. Harry realises that he is in danger but he is forced to attend. Everybody believes he cheated to enter. Especially Ron becomes very jealous and stops speaking to Harry.

Hagrid, the game keeper of Hogwarts and a very good friend of Harry, tells him, that the champions must battle a dragon in the 1st task. They have to order a golden egg with an evidence for the 2nd task. Harry was very nervous about the 1st task, but with the help from Hermione, he wins, with Viktor Krum. But he wins with help from Hermione.

At Christmas a Yule Ball is held in Hogwarts. A ball which is in the tradition during the Triwizarding Tournament. Harry learns he needs a partner for opening the dance. He asks a pretty Ravenclaw, Cho Chang, but she is already going with Cedric Diggory. And so he asks his classmate Parvati Patil. Ron invites Fleur, but he screams instead of asking, and runs away before she can answer. Eventually Ron goes with Parvati's twin Padma. At the dance the whole school is amazed to see a beautiful Hermione on Viktor Krum's side. The first time everyone can see that Ron has got some feelings for Hermione, because he is very jealous of Krum.

In the 2nd task, each champion must rescue a friend out of the Black Lake. Harry must rescue Ron, Hermione by Krum, and Cedric rescues Cho Chang. Fleur Delacour is unable to rescue her younger sister Gabrielle. Harry also rescues her , earning Fleur's respect, but causing him to finish second. He is now tied for 1st place with Cedric Diggory.

The 3rd and final task is a maze in which the Triwizard Cup is hidden. Whoever grab the trophy first is the winner. Harry and Cedric arrive at the Triwizard Cup together. Because they helped each other, they agree to grab it at the same time. However, the cup is a Portkey that transport them to a graveyard. Awaiting them are Peter Pettigrew and Lord Voldemort. Pettigrew kills Cedric and then uses Harry's blood to restore Voldemort's full body. Voldemort summons the the Death Eaters and engages Harry in a duel. Unknown to Voldemort, their wands are „brothers“ an will not work against one another. Suddenly Voldemort's victims spill out from his wand, including Cedric and Harry's parents. The shield allows Harry to get to the portkey and return to Hogwarts with Cedric's body.

Back at Hogwarts Professor Moody revealed to be Barty Crouch Jr. It was him who entered Harry's name in the goblet and assured he reached the Triwizard Cup.
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Elyas
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to zrób to;) a przydzielę plusa:D
 
 
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Cytat:

Harry Potter was the hero of series of boks by Joanne K. Rowling. They are playing in a world of witches and wizards.

Harry Potter and Goblet of Fire is the fourth book in the Harry Potter serie. With 630 pages (hardcover British edition) it is very huge to a children's book. The book attracted a lot of attention because J.K. Rowling warned that one of the characters would die.

The 14 year old Harry spents the end of the summer with the Weasley's and Hermione Granger in the Weasley's house. They're in atention of the Quidditch World Cup. During the meeting Death Eaters attack Mugoles (not magical persons). But they flee when the Dark Mark, Voldemord's sign appears at the sky. The sign was make by Winky using Harry's stolen wand. Winky is a house elf serving Barty Crouch, a oficial at the Ministry of Magic.

At the start of the new year are surprises for the students in Hogwarts. The new Defence Against the Dark Arts techer is the Auror (wizard trained to fight the Dark Arts) Alastor Moody.

Beside this there will be no Quidditch matches between Gryffindor, Ravenclaw, Hufflepuff and Slytherin because the Third-wizard Tournament is took place in Hogwarts. It is a centuries-old inter school competition betwen Hogwarts, Beauxbaton and Durmstrang. The prize is 1000 galleons. Students have to enter, must put their names into a legendary goblet – the Goblet of Fire. Dumbledore draws an age line around the Goblet, so no pupil under the age of 17 to enter the competition. The Goblet shoot out one hampion from each of the 3 schol. He select Cedric Diggory, Fleur Delacour and Viktor Krum. Mysteriously the Goblet also choose Harry. Harry realises that he is in danger but he is forced to attend. Everybody believes he cheated to enter. Especially Ron becomes very jeelous and stops speaking to Harry.

Hagrid, the game keeper of Hogwarts and a very good friend of Harry, tells him, that the champions must battle a dragon in the 1st round. They have to order a golden egg with an evidence for the 2nd round. Harry was very nervous about the 1st round, but with the help from Hermione, he wins, with Viktor Krum. But he wins with help from Hermione.

At Christmas a Yule Ball is held in Hogwarts. A ball which is in the tradition during the Third-wizarding Tournament. Harry learn he needs a partner for opening the dance. He asks a pretty Ravenclaw, Cho Chang, but she is already going with Cedric Diggory. And so he asks his classmate Parvati Patil. Ron invites Fleur, but he scream insted of asking, and runs away before she can answer. Eventually Ron goes with Parvati's twin Padma. At the dance the whole school is amazed to see a beautiful Hermione on Viktor Krum's side. The first time everyone can see that Ron has got some feelings for Hermione, because he is very jealous of Krum.

In 2nd round, each champion must rescue friend out of the Black Lake. Harry must rescue Ron, Hermione by Krum, and Cedric rescues Cho Chang. Fleur Delacour is unable to rescue her younger sister Gabrielle. Harry also rescues her , earning Fleur's respect, but causing him to finish second. He is now tied for 1st place with Cedric Diggory.

The 3rd and final round have been a maze in which the Third-wizard Cup is hidden. However grab the trophy first is the winner. Harry and Cedric will goes at the Third-wizard Cup together. Because they helped each other, they agree to grab it at the same time. However, the cup is a Portkey that transport them to a graveyard. Awaiting them are Peter Pettigrew and Lord Voldemort. Pettigrew kills Cedric and then uses Harry's blood to restore Voldemort's full body. Voldemort summons the the Death Eaters and fight Harry in a duel. Unknown to Voldemort, their wands are „brothers“ an will not work against one another. Suddenly Voldemort's victims spill out from his wand, including Cedric and Harry's parents. The shield is allowing Harry to get to the portkey and return to Hogwarts with Cedric body.

Back at Hogwarts Professor Moody revealed to be Barty Crouch Jr. It was him who entered Harry's name in gablet and ask he has be reached the Thirdwizard Cup.


Może być? :D: Pozmieniałem słówka i dodalem parę błędów... bedzie 4 plus albo 5 minus... ;)
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Elyas
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tylko mnie zastanawia jedno... bo on kazał napisać na 4 "paragrafy" czy jakoś tak;p w Polsce byśmy powiedzieli 4 akapity;p i na końcu ma być opinia...
 
 
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